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Tuesday, 3 May 2011

Memories


Memories ... can kill ...
when the heart inside is still ...
and the person you love, never meant to last,
is with you no longer, a shadow of the past,
the heart begins to die, the thoughts begin to kill ...

Memories ... are sad ...
when the love you never had ...
reminds you of times, when things were too good,
when hearts were happy, when you understood,
when you were together, used to love her li
ke mad ...

Memories ... are cold ...
when the agony is untold ...
when my eyes belie, the torment within,
the lachrymose lament, of my violin,
A pain more than what, my heart can hold ...

Memories ... don't heal,
when I go through this ordeal,
of heart that bleeds, emotions evoke
of soul that's empty, of spirits that broke,
of a dying mind, a broken man who can't feel ...

Memories ... I ignore,
Those thoughts I know no more,
The life that was, has changed so fast,
The life that is, lies broken, miscast,
That life that will be, I truely abhor ...


Memories ... can kill ...
when the heart inside is still ...
The things I've done, I cannot forgive,
I'm blind, I'm dead, There's nothing left to live ...
and all that remains, is a deathly chill ...




8 comments:

kamlesh said...

goood poem...i have read only one paragraph as it was little bit lengthy....next time please make shorter poems....rest is ok......

kamlesh said...

good job...really heart touching....but next time make short poems and save d time of people....

eternal love said...

thanks dude...
nwys when you sit to write a poem the content comes directly frm ur heart...
sometimes you end up writing smething short and sweet while on othr hand it also happens that you keep on writing till dawn..
so all depends on the situation and emotions at tht point of time..

nywys I will keep a note of ur suggestion bro..

Alia Dalwai said...

God, this is such a good poem...it has such strong emotions, I just couldn't read the whole thing!
Wow! Amazing!

Alia
http://aliascreativelife.blogspot.com/

eternal love said...

Thanks Alia...

sowmya said...

what a wonderful feel...very soulful poem ...

when the poem is written from the heart it shows the depth of it while reading...doesnt matter if its lengthy.....poem is to feel...

i liked it... :)

eternal love said...

Thanks Sowmya...I too agree with the point that poems are to feel not to just read for the sack of it..keep coming by.:)

ankit jain said...

really heart touching..loved it..:)

http://dare-to-think-beyond-horizon.blogspot.com/

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